.Air is the ocean we breathe.Air supplies us with oxygen which is essential for our bodies to live.If air has a pollution in it ,it turns to air pollution which is actually the addition of any harmful substances to the atmosphere. Thereare many effects and causes of air pollution
Air pollution is caused by sources like factories,power plants,dry cleaners,cars,and burning of fossil fuels. All these sources release harmful fumes that pollute the air. There has been an increase in the death rates resulting from various diseases caused by air pollution varying from breathing problem to lung cancer.Air pollution does not only affect people,but it also damages the whole ecological system in which plants and animals are harmed as well.It also preventing heat from escaping back to the space and this causes a global rise in temperature which make the food supply and sea level will be affected.
There are many solutions to decrease air pollution.We should eliminate the use of the fossil fuels .We should build factories and dry cleaners outside the city to avoid the harmful fumes.We should reduce the industrial activities in the area that are full of people.
finally,air pollution is aserious type of pollution which damages all living organism,and without aclean air,we can not live healthy .
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ردحذف1. If air has a pollution in it (if air is polluted) ,it turns to air pollution which is
2. Thereare (there are) many effects and causes (causes and effects) of air pollution.
3.It also preventing (prevents) heat from escaping
4. global rise in temperature which make the food supply and sea level will be affected.(which affects the food supply and raises the level of the sea).